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22:09:50: from email [@] markfarid.com
Hey, as a whole I went with everything you changed. I've made a few little changes here and there, plus the odd bigger bit. And I did change some things to do with the conformity on social media, but not drastically. There was the one paragraph (1), which I felt confused by I've attempted to connect stuff more, but I still think it feels a little bit loose at time - I have habit of jumping from thing to thing sometimes. Do you think it's too long? Otherwise it's great! Thank you Alice!
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